Class 12: Revising Your Observation Paper

Summary: We reviewed how to gather the information and write your entire first draft. You can write in a first-person narrative form as you would have a conversation as a support script for your final presentations. Then, time was given to reflect and start writing for your upcoming homework in individually with time to write. I consulted with each student about what readings and viewing might be helpful for your observations, guidance on your paper, and any questions you had.

Sample papers and presentations:

ESP2a Observation Paper A Bicycle Parking

ESP2a Observation Presentation A Bicycle Parking

ESP2b Observation Paper B Laziness

ESP2a Observation Presentation B Laziness

Guidance steps for completing your first draft:

G = Put your paper through Grammarly: Free Online Writing Assistant
A = APA Style  -Owl Purdue
V = 
Veritus Certify!  -Leander Hughes
E = Explanations attached below to check and download

Attachments: 

Instructions-for-ESP2a_Creativity-Observation-PaperDownload

ESP2a_Creativity_Oberservation_Assessment-ChecklistDownload

APA 7th Quick Guide

A Very Quick Guide APA to 7th

Homework: Your 1st draft due on Sunday, 11/10/2024 by 4 PM email (but earlier is better for you, right?).

1. Using your ideas from your notes on your readings and presentation, please write 1st draft of your essay with an by using the GAVE system (noted above). It is good to keep in mind:

    A). The formatting guidelines provided in the class of the APA 7th Quick Guides attached above.

    B). the organization of an essay with topic sentences that support each paragraph based on what you learned in class today.

2. Please use the Instructions for APA Observation Paper and type your paper in that document to make the writing easy for you.

3. Use any extra references. I tried to give you a lot of feedback and editing to help you compile a fantastic paper. 

4. Please put your name on the attachment. 

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